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【原创五绝】踏青——兼答博友“二线”中人

2013-03-08 09:57:44| 分类：原创诗词曲联赋（ | 标签： |举报 |字号大中小订阅

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惊蛰春阳漫，花飞杨柳岸。呼朋载酒行，顺应天恩伴。

“二线”中人原玉：

（一）今日又天晴，温度直线升。告友一件事：此时好踏青。

（二）今日天好玩，一夜到夏天。天变心不变，快乐永相伴！

作者附言：本绝仄起入仄韵式（仄仄平平仄，平平平仄仄。平平仄仄平，仄仄平平仄）。平水翰韵。

附录《平水韵》去声：十五翰
翰[寒韵同]瀚岸汉难[灾难]断[决断]乱叹[寒韵同]观[楼观]干<树干,干练>散[解散]旦算[名词]玩烂贯半案按炭汗赞漫[寒韵同。又副词，独用]冠[冠军]灌爨窜幔粲灿璨换焕唤涣悍弹[名词]惮段看[寒韵同]判叛绊鹳伴畔锻腕惋馆旰捍疸但罐盥婉缎缦侃蒜钻谰

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